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Open Poetry #34

Threshold

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-10-24 11:35 AM

His body cracked,
    from an eterity of damnnation.
A blinded man, set free to see,
    providing for generations of sons and daughters.
Destiny, held firm a vision,
    with no strings of guilt to tie us down.
His body was cracked,
    but he wasn't crippled.

Aged with his sacfrice,
the sins he endured with each crack of the whip.
blood shed, to free man.

The glory of a sacrificed King,
upon a cross with dignity.
Love crosses the threshold of eternity.

To prosper our hopeful futures,
a generation to spread the wealth of truth.
A glorious love, unconditional.

He shed his blood upon a cross,
he lived to die,
a sacrifice for all eternity.

-before I read it differently-
His body cracked,
Aged with his sacfrice,
the sins he endured with each crack of the whip.
blood shed, to free man.
    from an eterity of damnnation.

A blinded man, set free to see,
The glory of a sacrificed King,
upon a cross with dignity.
Love crosses the threshold of eternity.
    providing for generations of sons and daughters.

Destiny, held firm a vision,
To prosper our hopeful futures,
a generation to spread the wealth of truth.
A glorious love, unconditional.
    with no strings of guilt to tie us down.

His body was cracked,
He shed his blood upon a cross,
he lived to die,
a sacrifice for all eternity.
    but he wasn't crippled.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

1 posted 2004-10-24 11:47 AM

Vivid and enlightening...richly penned!

Robert Joseph

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-10-24 03:42 PM

Love crosses the threshold of eternity.

It does, He told us so.

Very beautiful work, dear Kellie.

Love, Margherita

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2004-10-25 12:04 PM

Wonderful read.

I like this

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