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vandana
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0 posted 2004-12-17 07:10 PM



How do you think I feel
About you?
How do you say it's through?
How do you think
our days are over?
Love is special,
We had some time
How do you think I feel?
I feel for you,
Life is a mystery,
Mystery mays,
To share and know the feelings
Feelings I have for you,
Life is sometimes
Bittersweet,
How do you think I feel?
Leaving you behind,
But you don't have to worry,
Iam doing fine,
Not knowing
You are not mine,
How do you think I feel?
Feel about you,
I feel this love
Would have stayed longer,
How do you thinkI feel?
Spending my whole life
Without loving you
How do you think I feel?

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-17 07:13 PM



Midnitesun
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2 posted 2004-12-17 07:44 PM


You feel sad, that's how, and maybe a bit disappointed that it didn't work out.
Enjoyed the write, Vandana.
Wish the relationship had worked out for you.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-12-17 11:49 PM


Nice writing...James
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-12-21 03:00 PM


HUGS and Happy Holidays Vandanna. Enjoyed your words.
suthern
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5 posted 2004-12-21 06:01 PM


I know it's no consolation... but many of us have felt much the same way.

Great write!!!

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-12-21 06:48 PM


Yes, many of us have felt this way Vandana.
Have a happy holiday...
Good write!

     Season's Greetings!

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2004-12-21 08:20 PM


Sad write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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