Open Poetry #34 |
How Sure is Sure? |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
How sure is sure? Only a fool is sure of sure and The ambience of its allure A mountain top or valley green Is but a conjured mental scene At least the ones that I have fed And issued from illusions bed That played their dance of love and pain Upon the shadows of my brain I’ve learned to conjure in a wile With apt and crafty place of guile Feed the grit and mill of seed To make of it a meal of need Some make of it an Ivy tower Complete with all the sense of power A press that makes the dream by ream And daily prints the seem of dream It is the paper left my door An epilogue of evermore |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
so you are saying that being confused is a good thing? (TG) *smile* Beautiful writing, Sy. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, I just discussed this topic with my son. Through doubt we look for certainties. We never stop to explore ... and that's the good thing. Thought provoking write here, so beautifully shared. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Might a small but cunning raven have visited your door, Sir Sy? Evermore?? Good Morning. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing No only that Chaos is the master prime Painted on a canvas of time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you sweet, I always enjoy your replies. Barry, May I once again repeat. Chaos is the master prime Painted on a canvas of time |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, so you believe in the theory of chaos - me too - one can never be sure of sure- too many variables and then there is always the whimsy of the unexpected. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
“A mountain top or valley green Is but a conjured mental scene” And yet you wouldn’t jump from that mountain top, lest the bottom be beyond your imagination. John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When I was young, ~ I mean "younger"! I tended to talk in absolutes. Everything was "definitely this" or "definintely" that. As I have matured I have come to see and appreciate the grays in life. This new attitude also allowed me to be open to more possibilities in life. I enjoyed your wisdom pearls, Sir Sage! Hugs with love, EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AHA... chaos IS good for the flexible... Thank you, my friend... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'A mountain top or valley green Is but a conjured mental scene' Yet, seen through your well-worded thoughts ... it is always a treat~ It SURE is !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think it's a buddhist saying that I think of, "the moment you have found it, know you are lost" That is what this reminded me of... you are a dear and wise soul sy. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan I like you answer. Huan Yi You got that right. Earth Angel I think we all do. Sunshine, Thank you my dear. Marge, You are a sweetheart. passing, Thank you sweet. serenity, You are very well read. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your words bring a vision that seeps from deep in my soul. Only it doesn't stay, for as soon as it appears, I don't know where it goes. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ah Sy...and how did I know you'd sneak "evermore" into something I chanced upon? grins. missed you man! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I do know that sure is never a sure bet! Never! Where it not for unrest and choas we would not have any history, art, science, religion, etc. you smart cutie patootie you! The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all art and science. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, I was sure, but now I'm not so sure...and tomorrow, I may be sure again...oh brother, give me a day at the spa...messaging my brain...LOL Another great write to view and ponder...soaking it all up thanks a bunch dear Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inot2B Exactly devina Missed you too. Sharon, You are a love. LeeJ You welcome dear. |
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