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Reggae Requiem (Poem of Music #3)
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Reggae Requiem (Poem of Music #3) |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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Keep it simple and smooth real smooth riding a rising bassline from note to note ascending the scale across steel drum's tribal rhythms. keep it plain and to the point yet still smooth following staccato chants across spiritual and politically charged lyrics locks of peace and revolution fly in purposeful beats across skies of yellow,black, and green sunlight radiance disappears from the isles of revolution while campfire rhythms and low voice mournings carry out upon the back of the winds across every ocean wave to the mainland. (another addition to my ongoing series of music gere poems. i hope you all enjoy it.) nice use of muffin |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
radiant poem! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
to write a poem about music is quite a challenge, since music is very complex...but you did it well!  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I agree, you did it very well! The words sing. Awesome... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed this so much, I've shared it with a very special person! |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
I'm glad you all enjoyed the poem. Thanks for stopping by nice use of muffin |
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