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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2004-12-16 03:50 AM

She's the type of woman that
leaves you laughing
leaves you less
as she makes her way to lack
exiting stage left and that
is all that you could hope to be,
holding back the drapery
velvet
passing by as she
weaves herself a memory
nibbling the air.

shekinah
from the serpancy
the quivering
of flesh is just--
as in that it's meant to be
and ever-never
something mere

She is worthy
of ellipse
and a few more beg the need
of the dot-dot-dot and this?

Questioning the need of it
from beneath the greed
is blessed
a legacy
of less,
I plead:

"Hemingway?"

I watched her shake,
as she smacked her lips
she spake:

"Moliere could do."

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-12-16 05:39 AM

letting you know I am reading you...
hugs
M

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2004-12-16 05:41 AM

"If not for women, I would have conquered the whole world"

~~Henry II

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-12-16 05:59 AM

She is worthy
of ellipse

~*~

Something to strive for.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-12-16 10:41 AM

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-12-16 10:47 AM

exiting stage left and that
is all that you could hope to be,
holding back the drapery
velvet
passing by as she
weaves herself a memory
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what you do with word play and line breaks makes me moth giddy...
what you do with rhyme blows me mothy mind.