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It was only a dream
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It was only a dream |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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When you can’t quite run the madness out and it follows no matter what ever you do, listen to me for there’s truth in my dreams that speak of a guardian angel with you. From out of your skin; how could that be, my lover, dream lover, speaks quietly and we cry together tears of the heart for he must leave me to look after you. “Come back, come back!” I shouted in vain to the madness in you running, running, and no poet or me can adequately pen the very deep feeling that came over me. My love on the street, his shadow with me, to both a goodbye till the madness runs out and for me nought remains but the memory and the knowing that you aren’t ever alone. You’ve stolen my lover till next you should sleep for dreams, you know, are never complete until in daylight we understand more and merge two parts into one wholesome heart. It was only a dream but perhaps it could be there’s a part of us all we cannot see! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm seeing several different storylines here, Helen...all quite compelling, and all quite needful... and it takes a whole heart to divide itself so well... even if "only a dream" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...very passionate, very poignant. Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and perhaps someday Lady, a dream come true You are some very special artist in your own...and will someday be what you already are, your going where the rivers flow...fabulous writing and perception... |
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