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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Night too, is cold and longs for the warmth of a sun it has never seen And so folds itself into a bell of fragile silence Even the trees deep in frigid slumber are holding their breath |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I felt it. brrrrrrrr.  well done."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ed, is that you? *wink* loved this! ~tier |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
even in brevity you leave us with such incredible images and thought. Well done Ed. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, your feet are cold again right? Okay, I get the hint - out come the knitting needles Yeti.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
M'friend.... And so folds itself into a bell of fragile silence Even the tress deep in frigid slumber are holding their breath your words... most always move something inside me... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Ed...so much enjoy your words. Hugs~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
oh Magnificent Bro, eerie too. adding to my library. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
bravo - excellent - love this SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Nice personification... A pleasure to read. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
definitely feeling the dark and the cold around here~~ enjoyed M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And so folds itself into a bell of fragile silence ======================= damn..... what an amazing verse that is... and...this poem makes me say..IWIHWT!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And so folds itself into a bell of fragile silence ~*~ I know that sound... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, you just described exactly how I feel. I wish I could see the Still Night alongside you, Eddie . . . This was beautiful in a melancholy sort of manner. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
For a moment you had me fooled wranx with that Dutch title, but your poem is beautiful, even though it is in English LOL  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
beauty! true, beautiful writing. the last stanza was a great way to finish off. excellently done. LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A portrait in ice....well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nice one, Wranx! Corinne |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Oh man that ~~~Shivered~~~ my timbers....*grin*! Nice imagery. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
perfect |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
*chilled* Well done!! ~sky Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!! |
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