Open Poetry #34 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
does it bother you how your flexibility seems to fit my intentions no hands or eyes folding lady into woman making wings butterfly from vibrations they shiver shape shift outside to in they begin and on some no name street you pass your other self as she parks at the curb with veils bound around her wrists ________________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are tenderly watching a lady grow, into a woman...with your kind eyes... Well done, your a very allowing person....sitting back watching, allowing everyone else their day in the sun...and you know, that my friend, deems your happiness, grace and intellectual 3rd eye Hugs to you and thank you for sharing |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you expose the naughty from the buttoned up dresses of the nice church ladies you bad boy ! shame on you ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j...thank your for the thoughts and warm, you bless me often _____________ ms inky, and you smile so wickedly as you sit improperly in the first pew, spank you so very much |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here... one of my favorite comic strips, when I can catch her, is Rose is Rose... a loving housewife, who enjoys childhood daydreams with her adventurous son... but when she is alone and frustrated, her "alteregobikerwoman" takes over... she makes me smile, too... Well done, Sir! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine can see an alterego stepping out hmmmmmmmmmmm imagining how yours might be.... thanks lady friend for the eyes |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*smile* ah those veils again... nicely done D! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wink and smile.. hold your wrists still please |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Perhaps the lady is Shaherizade - and though veiled, beneath lies the spirit of a thousand and one nights - perhaps more - a blending of the exotic and the proper - Enjoyed this Dark - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan..ya can't have your cake and jump out of it too...confusious say, she who sit on fence get splinters in her inyourwindows, thanks lady |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, but D - I can jump out of the cake, climb back in, jump out, climb in . . . well, you get the picture - And as for fence sitting - it let's one leg dangle on each side - wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! And as for splinters - all the more fun to have plucked out Why don't ya just climb on up? You might like the fence - unless, of course, it's barbed - owie! Hehe - messin' witcha! Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
censored comment with highly illustrated images softly painted over with invisible ink |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah yes that great Japanese art one of my favorites. You sir, can write this stuff so dang good, yes you do. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm..images of the dance of the seven veils in my mind... wanna see me dance Dark? Season's Greetings! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mysteria.. ancient with a new twist or so...thanks and big grin.. ___________ lady E...yes bring the veils here please I wash them in hot water and they shrink into such tiny little items..thanks lady friend |
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