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Snowing Senryus
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Snowing Senryus |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Enchantment falling Wonders anticipated Diamonds careen Delicate lighting Magnificence magnified Winter’s wonderment Shimmering sequins Maniacal mannequins Snowbound silhouettes Calendar cavorts Hibernation’s happenstance Never plan winter… |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful Kari!!! You and anyone else can feel free to send pictures of snow directly to my email, because I am missing it this year!!!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea... Wonderful alliterations and imagery...much enjoyed!! Hugs~Nancy |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful indeed !! hugs, Chris  Don't forget my presents!! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love the snow! Hope we get some here this year... Great words Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
sigh snow glimmer tears 'tis that wonder time of year when diamonds fall Lovely your words - like the kiss of winter itself - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, sissie! Almost as pretty as the sunshine here!!  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Beneath it all, flowers rest In bed, under thick blankets Very nice, Karilea...The picture is beautiful as well are the poems... enjoyed __________ice/ford |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yet another style you have mastered with such grace. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely! *S* Somehow, cold rain just doesn't inspire quite as well! *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Written in cold of winter Winter wonderland |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous I wish one day of snow here, but I doubt that will happen |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm a fan of anything like a haiku, and preferably in big bunches....a drift of senryu snow would warm me for sure....and this one did! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Agreed with everyone else - this is a fantastic write!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enchanting, dear Karilea! Oh, I want that picture to materialize and to walk in that silence! Love, Margherita |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
All great! Hard to pick a favorite...thought it was the 2nd one and then I read on. Some wonderful images and use of language. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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angele Junior Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 35Malta (tiny island in the Med) |
loved your words.....they make me wish it snowed on my island of Malta ! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Many of your writings convey a great peace. All of these do and remind of the purpose of this season. Peace to you, my friend. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful expressions of a season of chilled beauty. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done Sun. You paint the portrait well. Happy holidays dear one. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Senryu's Kari and such a pretty pic, one day perhaps I'll experience snow at Christmas time..sigh. mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Karilea! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
These were wonderful and I enjoyed them so much. It's snowing here tonight and my little piece of the world looks so beautiful. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
*shivers* We don't have any snow in MN this year (can you BELIEVE it??), so thanks for sending us a bit of it from your part of the world, Karilea!! ~sky Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
"Calendar cavorts ......... Never plan winter." Perfect! Bob |
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