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An Evenings Dream
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An Evenings Dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An Evenings Dream I caught the essence of a seem And spent the evening in a dream Less the binds of passions hold I walked once more the youth of bold Back within my Eden’s garden God had granted me a pardon Opened up the heavens door And I was home again once more Once more I was a snow white dove Once more my all was wrapped in love And echoes played a melody In whispers of old fantasy Where sun and stars showed light and bright And moon the other side of night Where Eve wore nothing but the truth And that is truth I swear for sooth Did I dream this butterfly? Or the butterfly dream I |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you know, I don't believe one day would be as good, without a song from the library of your mind....thank you Sy for this.... Hugs |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where sun and stars showed light and bright And moon the other side of night Where Eve wore nothing but the truth And that is truth I swear for sooth Did I dream this butterfly? Or the butterfly dream I -------------------------------- me thinks you are the sky of the butterfly  I do so love your rhyme scheme dreams.  *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are the sweetest, good morning dea. JM, I'll just say from a butterfly to a moth, Have a wonderful and happy holiday. and from Randy. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are so in sync with all around if the butterfly dreamed you? She did not let the rest of us down...  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A good question Sy. I shall think on this throughout the day. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
Seymour - nice read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely, fluttery poem! Light, delicate ~ and full of life and whimsy. Fly like a butterfly forever more! Love & Angel Light, EA P.S. 'Twould be a butterfly's dream divine if it were to dream of you!   |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Did I dream this butterfly? Or the butterfly dream I Or could it be life is but a dream-- and existence wouldn't be, if the other didn't dream... I like the way you think, as well as write, Right On! *grin* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning write Sy. I'm running late...off to lunch. ~Lunchtime hugs & tea, Nancy |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing this morning, Sy Guy!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, but you do tend to make the ladies' hearts all flutter don't you?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Sweet answer thank you. scorpio Thank you my friend. Daniel, Thank you so much. Earth Angel, Cute reply, thank you. A Tone of Voice Enjoyed your reply, thank you. Nancy, Hope you had a good lunch. Ethel Thank you sweety. Sharon, I hope so. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your evening's dream makes for morning's delightful read... this is beautiful, my friend! *S* |
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