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Cattails (Frances in the Dark - part II)
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Cattails (Frances in the Dark - part II) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Women friends they fall in love cooing over glossy parts hold each other's hand and tend to each other's shadows' spark in a blind consistency of loyalty and 'what is right' what just might could possibly (go wrong) if they should come apart and a part is much too long like the infamous cattails braided rugs and rockers wail a panic - running where to hide? as the rock reveals the nail bedded in the chinks of sail shredding in too strong the wind Women friends are lovers in necessity of what thou art (I could never be...) chagrin and the wish I could complete the start of what I'll never be like you m'friend how great thou art. How can I become the heat of the snake's inhale-- a tale - juxt-infinity a grin... Of women: kissers softer arms comfort in the place of harm a fort a foxhole in the sands answers to what we fight for... the music just beyond the door irrevoccably slammed shut. * * * So we fell in love, we did The way that women will we were locked in elbow unison "not without a fight" we grinned constant smiles anew of this: "women are well worth the fall" and reason why the birth of wings marred the angels backs I saw Michael sainted before throne in the stance of one atoned with the quills a-feathering growing as I watched... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Freezin' me arse off...goin to bed I'll be back! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll come back... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written and felt.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 oh how right you are. *skipping to part III* "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing...just amazing..off to number three!! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
catching up to my sister !  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
damn... building rush of memory emotion and Art all in one and there's more... unbelieveable |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Seems to be the inside track on what was observed but not known! Cool... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I had to come back for another fix of this and am amazed even more so the second time around! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Gosh.. you're AWESOME, absolutely fantabulous M'lady M  into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yanno?... I really have to read you more... This is just so packed with emotion... I miss this... and YOU...  Going to find part three... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, you ARE a heart-sister thanking you, for singing this song |
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