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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there was no message there in the bottle only in movies do the heros win but the bottle was warm in my hands and the contents soothed for the daydream hours in neptune's back yard where the horizon was worthy as a women with long legs and laughter colored clouds I sipped to her and to the amber of her eyes and wrote her a poem on low tide parchment tomorrow she will be as the wind _________ Dark |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
gone like the wind yet the memory lingers..... lovely~ Atov~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in neptune's back yard where the horizon was worthy as a women with long legs and laughter colored clouds I sipped to her and to the amber of her eyes and wrote her a poem on low tide parchment tomorrow she will be as the wind ~*~ What is nice about this? Is that the wind always returns... Beautiful, DS...simply beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You do have a way with words! ~ and I read them slowly and savour them...  EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, very beautiful M |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
dreams are as the wind - stirring, yet fleeting - enjoyed this Dark one-  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
atov, thanks for the review ________________ ms sunshine, yes it does seem to return could spend hours there watching the sails change shapes thanks lady friend _________________ Earth Angel, humble thanks to you for your reviews __________________ MM's thanks hon for the smile ____________ ms susan...nothing is real unless you make it...thanks for the read ms |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yep but always more to come |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful! Fabulous imagery throughout this fine piece of writing. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow! Enjoyed this~ ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and wrote her a poem on low tide parchment tomorrow she will be as the wind ==================================== *sigh* *moth sigh*  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I'm not sure what about this captured my attention so completely but I was enraptured...absolutly beautiful. ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hey DS Morning  A heartwarming story which is not only admirable, but caring enough to understand her and realize her.... Hugs |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
dang DS, this one is simply beauty... I love it when you write the beauty stuff.  Good morning. |
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