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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-12-11 10:10 PM

Terms come so often in clench
And tight gripped pain of acceptance
So aware of you in the outcome of inside me
Seeing into paradigms and solitary winds
An outline of blue in my vision
That speaks directly with my heart
Concentric waves encircle you as pulse
Calling to me as a beacons strobe
In synchronicity of view
Though sight unseen to premise to
The tight of mind commands
Unfurling fingers one by one
How much unduly still undone
An understanding tributary
Touches into deep contrary
To warm each segment to the wrist
Between the ache of tender twist
Into the marrow tender kind
Sending in vibration
Every thought that crossed my mind
Easing in between fates deem
To be at home
Within your hands

Copyright Kkh 12/11/04

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-12-11 10:20 PM

Yanno? I felt that.

The mind massage, I mean.

Warm and lovely, and soothing to the soul.

Your poetry is purty too.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-12-11 10:21 PM

To be at home
Within your hands

Perfect ending to a perfectly beautiful write. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2004-12-11 10:25 PM

love this line:

Seeing into paradigms and solitary winds

and the last two most of all!!! great flow, rhythn and rhyme

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-12-12 05:56 AM

Sending in vibration
Every thought that crossed my mind
Easing in between fates deem
To be at home
Within your hands

perfectly expressed!

A feeling I recognize.

Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-12-12 09:27 AM

"To be at home
Within your hands"

~ How absolutely purrr-fect!

EA

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-12-12 10:51 AM

Was it really that relaxing? Am I supposed
to sit here and just accept it? Launching
a scud snowball into the Hot Tub...DUCK!

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