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Open Poetry #34

Looking out of windows

Contabo
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since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

0 posted 2004-12-11 06:12 PM

Looking out of Windows

Sunbeams window peep falling
Through Venetian blinds Zebra striped
On Berber patterns of outside reckonings
Whilst fireplace watching spellbound holds me
Gazing flame to smoke drafting wishes
Burning reality on second hand ticking
Even as the clock scolds me squirrel-like
Chattering wall-perched as I hoard away
Buried nut memories from Autumn.

Contabo

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-12-11 06:19 PM

You created a picture in words

I like it although it hinted of nowhere to go and nothing to do

Dave

Contabo
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since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

2 posted 2004-12-11 09:43 PM

some winter days have not much to do or places to go, Dave.

:-}

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-12-12 12:15 PM

Nice painting of winter in words, and a nice place to stay inside, and reflect in.

Let there be peace on earth ~ and let it begin with me

Contabo
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since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

4 posted 2004-12-12 07:05 PM

thank you mysteria!

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