Open Poetry #34 |
Pass |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Pass sometimes there is no proof on the outside no marks of memories inside we are just all held together with the stitches of time and the only good thing is… is that the past has passed just some words cut out |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady That's one way of looking at it. Enjoyed the look. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"inside we are just all held together with the stitches of time" Yup! That, and duct tape... *smile* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Nice one.....~P |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
I am not a person. I am a succession of persons Held together by memory. When the string breaks, The beads scatter. Lindley Williams Hubbell |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Pass-passing-past. The lava sets, an island solidifies and nowhere on earth is the loam more fertile at that point. Enjoyed another compact write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write Helen! Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yet there are some moments that I keep filed under skin so I can live them again praying I might dream them new. love ya ladyslick |
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