Open Poetry #34 |
daydream instrumental |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
no I have not changed so don't be tempted to be a lady again the windows are open and the doors too the watchers stand there with the sun behind their voyeur waiting for a dancer and I am the music vulgar notes erectly sucked from the ends of my daydream instrumental ______________ dark |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahha yes...and your music is awesome... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interesting write! Lots of implications within. Enjoyable. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that's how i like it. straight up, with or without a twist |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
poignant, this - sometimes a sonata or a waltz is heard - and that's okay too - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Flute...no... Oboe... hmm... music, surely.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I suppose that's where the cliche came from You are music to the ears |
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