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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-12-10 06:25 PM

living
painted in white
slightly invisible
one i
never too worn
to be thrown

is it time
for ethereality
to collide into
thick air?

a taken life
hard to hold in a hand
for the color to thicken lithe lines…

cinder
rushed
through
water
holding its core
is a triumph.

keep the ashes warm

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with you

1 posted 2004-12-10 07:46 PM

You always write so cool...I'm not always sure just what you mean, but I always like it...reminds me of a Bsquirrel I used to read

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-12-11 12:22 PM

I'll always keep the ashes warm

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-12-11 11:11 AM

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2004-12-11 11:34 AM

Love the images but not sure I completely understand but sometimes that's a good thing and it gives imagination an exercise.

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

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