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Heretic or Illusory Death - (A call to Arms)
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Heretic or Illusory Death - (A call to Arms) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Heretic or Illusory Death (A call to Arms) Traditions stretched from thought with deity on their lips, in the minds of man, and on their heart… Pledges formatted into law to decree a love for righteousness and liberty… Proclaimed sustenance individually, from the youngest to the elderly. Each state, and state of mind: A protection veiled and understood, to surely stand the test of time… Yet time has lent a cancer intertwined. A growth in diligence handed to a new sovereignty perplexed in the sublime: that intent of this new Nationalized Man… The New World Order on the slate, written with invisible ink from commencement day, a conceptual slink. And this new man’s God would soon be in the trade for freedom’s unconditional slave… Liberty pursuant the law becomes the governed. Righteous only by nominated kings defining their own conventions for the free, behind a wooden bench, a wig, perceived as sheep, yet embodied a creodont… Sheep, with teeth of wolves, organized to correct God’s rules of elect. All while this giant nation sleeps and its pride on knees does weep, and its political correctness incestuously has produced useless men, frightened, and weak… |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
My own opinion but I think this is very well written. I'm tempted to say "exceptional" because of the subtlety, the message, the thinking meaning. It does seem to be a case of "All for One" and "None for all". Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hey JL, good to see you  I agree with Dave, but along the way there are tons of good people, who don't go along with the crowds....who are genuine in care and concern....I know, cause Your one of many of them.... Excellent writing sir! Happy Weekend to ya |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I sure am lovin' some of the posts here lately and this among them. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Egads! Sometimes I think I am alone in my thoughts...But JL, there are some of us camped on the outside of their thinking, we are holding hands and dancing around the tree of life...I can see by this poem you are one of us....I hold out my hand to you, take it please, and lets dance. __________ice/ford ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exceptionally done! |
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