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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-12-09 05:34 AM

I dont think I have published All - rewritten before

Dave

All

The body to modesty learns soul tingling breath moving bells to ring matching hearts to your spirit moving harmony to discord in life spiralling light cascading to confuse the mind and body as you soar, fall and soar again until words no longer matter and say all

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-12-09 07:23 AM

yes, don't ya wish everyone in the world would constantly feel and display this...

Hun, you've written a classic here...
Beautiful thoughts

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-12-09 01:15 PM

Thanks Lee.

I seem for some reason to have completely changed my style of writing.

Dave

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-12-09 06:34 PM

I am out of breath .... I am soaring and don't even need to speak.

... amazing.

Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-12-09 07:30 PM

Margherita

Many thanks

Dave

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2004-12-09 10:36 PM

Great write, if only it was to be

Julie

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-12-10 12:44 PM

amazing

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-12-10 09:47 AM

Dave, sometimes I don't understand your writing, sometimes I do, but either way, I love it

and this is beautiful

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2004-12-10 02:34 PM

Thanks all.

I'm going through some kind of seachange.

Building the web site based simply is taking up time.

I just spent 2 hours just thinking about words and whether they were worth "working drafts", publishable or themes.

Nice thing about having to think about a basic web site is that it is a great catalyst for making you work on words and realising words were ok.

Thanks again for the words.

Getting the advert in, I doing the site for fun - just my own words and no revenue - www.davepage.dial.pipex.com

Dave

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