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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2004-12-08 09:07 AM


Tumbling through dreams,
ecstatic anonyminity,
isolation, silence,
no going back now.

Severed is my past,
detached to ensure my future.
I come to a dilema,
to seperate completely?

My mind has accepted,
it holds meetings with my heart,
trying to win it over,
everyday it's case gets stronger.

I want to yield to the mind,
and i will, i have to.
i have no use with waiting,
it is time for separation.

Gloriously alone i am,
music plays at the mind/heart conference,
and relaxes enough for the decision,
made in sober, calculated judgement.

Things have passed, have gone before me,
God is within me, i trust his love.
He tells me to move forward,
i comply with those wishes.

Leave all behind is my new call,
those in the past will not make it
to my future, life is too short.
Goodbye past.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (12-08-2004 10:14 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-12-08 10:55 AM


Things have passed, have gone before me,
God is within me, i trust his love.
He tells me to move forward,
i comply with those wishes.


Good job. Your heart knows what counts.

Emotional detachment from the past is a good thing. Yet we need not deny it.

Love, Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-12-08 10:58 AM


"Leave all behind is my new call,
those in the past will not make it
to my future, life is too short.
Goodbye past."


Beautifully written.  This verse is spoken as passing through the door to the future.
Enjoyed this.

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-12-08 11:15 AM



"Severed is my past,
detached to ensure my future.
I come to a dilema,
to seperate completely?

My mind has accepted,
it holds meetings with my heart,
trying to win it over,
everyday it's case gets stronger."

~ Oh, do I ever understand your words!!!
Yeppers! Mind over matter!

Good luck to you, Dear Rose of Gold.


EA

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-12-28 03:57 AM


The past is gone....we have a whole new year ahead of us....I am your future.

HAPPY NEW YEARS MY LOVE! THIS IS A GREAT NEW YEARS POEM!
IT is good to let go of all those dead logs...and change is good....really good!

I am so proud of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

God will guide us together.....he has so far...

Love your ~VQ


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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