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Query and Pray |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Down deep, the gulp of endless fathom Remnants hidden searching outcome Each grain suspends of trepid waters Laid to rest her convent quarters Let to rest and out of sight, lip tight Shy the touch of tender probe Discovered ‘neath a sapphire robe She waits By loop the knots and to degree Absorbing tears so tenderly And tenderly to come the sea Down deep, and still her remedy He glistens, in reluctant dives More capable to reach he strives To take her hand as time arrives She waits So curious by natures wager Turn to stone the tears that cage her But his resolve may now dissolve The torrent cut of passions razor Down deep, where weary sleep A lullaby to cry an ocean’s motion In caveat, tides healing potion She Copyright Kkh 11/07/04 |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Excellect write, Very nice to read |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, this is a great write!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perfection glows like the language of come hither...excellent writing! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is an excellent write. But too short! More! More! More! JL |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And tenderly to come the sea Down deep, and still her remedy He glistens, in reluctant dives More capable to reach he strives To take her hand as time arrives She waits Very moving, refined poetry, dear TD! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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