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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-12-07 04:42 PM

We find silence in the most
unexpected places.

Beneath the wave of your words
lies the stillness of an
ocean.

Whisper to me...only once.

And my world will pause to
listen.

Then slowly touch your
lips to mine...

And I will taste this
silent ocean.

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

1 posted 2004-12-07 04:48 PM

I should have said that to someone a while ago. Touching and enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-12-07 05:01 PM

So very beautiful!!!!
Love this one Eric!!!

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2004-12-07 05:01 PM

Whisper to me...only once.

And my world will pause to
listen.

I wish I had words adequate to tell how effortlessly this slipped inside my heart... incredibly beautiful!!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-12-07 05:46 PM

Your silence is reverberating in my heart!

Linda

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-12-07 09:21 PM

For beneath the surface is where all true treasure rests.
*S*

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-12-07 09:25 PM

you have a beautiful way of caressing a single moment

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-12-07 10:05 PM

just beautifully you

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2004-12-07 11:18 PM

Silence is such a precious thing. A touching write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-12-08 02:21 AM

Definately nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-12-08 10:23 AM

Whisper to me...only once.

And my world will pause to
listen.

Our two worlds pause
in the same moment
suspended
yet anchored safely
in Love
silent oceans merge
and true ecstasy
rises like the brightest sun
in which we bask
in sweet fulfilment

Beautiful and infinitely inspiring, dear Eric.

I love you.
Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2004-12-08 11:03 AM

Ohhhhh yeah! I agree! This is a wonderful poem.

JL

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2004-12-08 02:06 PM

How romantic!

Enjoyed

Someone, anyone, show me where this man is
I LOVE THIS MAN!!!! (winky)

Great write

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

13 posted 2004-12-09 05:40 AM

Very good Eric

Dave

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

14 posted 2004-12-09 06:00 PM

Lovely write...amazing job!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2004-12-11 12:49 PM

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

16 posted 2004-12-11 07:01 AM

I read that firstt line and just knew I'd love it.
And I do.
Yes... silence in the most unexpected places.
Love it.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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