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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I noticed your ring later after someone spent a lot too to make sure it stood out more than your bosom or body in jeans maybe it was those eyes with their own diamonds or your hair in the wind when you said it was warmer and you like how that feels or when you looked at my hands and smiled at my gestures as you drew them on paper or that special way you grined when you said little things that make your mouth a movie that a man wants to watch all the way to the end ___________ Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you... looks like you're in "like"... a lot. Excellent play here... with words and all...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun.. the view from this place makes it a woman thank you for the eyes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Enjoyed the play on words, have a good one. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I really like this - d - simply lovely - you do have such a gift with words -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
all I can say, is I'm in the shadow of your smile today...scrathin like a kitten for everything I can get...smiles and hugs such beauty! exceptionAL! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah....this is one of your best, yaknow |
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