Open Poetry #34 |
luke warm lonely |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it was innocent enough just the rain and the window with a neon tavern sign and a fireplace in the corner a couple of glasses of an "it is ok" wine and he left in a hurry before you started crying and then there was time too much for people like us and that song I played in search of another you said it was lovely and did I know it was yours like some other song was mine but the lonely in your eyes was the same kind and just a dance or two was not quite warm enough to keep us through the night but there are other ways ______________ Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, There are always other ways. Enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ok, so now you've got my curiosity juices flowing, and I'm even swishing em around in my mouth...wondering....How? Smiles and hugs Morning Dark keeping my fingers crossed for a sequal.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at Lee J... sounds like a story brewing... is it as strong as good coffee? |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
other ways, indeed... always a thrill, darkie... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You bet there are other ways. Hugs YOU! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You surely could keep this one going, and I will be looking for it as well. Nicely done Dark! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You whisper the lonely so very well - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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