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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 dear sir or should i sing your love goes back amongst ancient time where romans roam making love so carelessly didn't see the sign so ruins they came to be love is blind but control isn't kind let them dwell in their sin become blind to what's happening within to their suprise i took them beyond the skies told of what the future holds but yet they let sin take control man's fate god's hate lies despise devil will shove who will win numbers again in the sky 6 elements 6 signs 6 cycles now your turn to disciple been blank for a while, these last few just came into my head, dont know why. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An interesting write, has a very nice flow What significence does the number 6 hold for you? I'm assuming you are referencing 666, otherwise often interpreted in Christianity as the mark of the beast? |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i dont know and i am not into 666 it just came out |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much to ponder here Marsha. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey Gal... You wrote prophetically as it poured...could feel your thoughts. There is good time, well spent, in stepping back and reflecting on what you see and feel. This kind of reminded me of looking into a puddle on a rainy day. Well done. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very interesting write, dear Marge. There is an apocaliptic touch to it ... The repetition of six can mean that we need to be grounded (I read this interpretation on a channeled message of Archangel Michael ). Love, Margherita |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
http://plagiarist.com/poetry/2271/ And please don't mistake what is merely a good website's bad name for a comment. |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Words to ponder, for sure... Enjoyed your write. Dautz... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! you won't stay blank long I have faith! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
almost sounds as if you were describing Alexander? Didn't see the movie but this was indeed a wonderful way to depict the flags we were so lovingly given. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks for your replys. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome write! Eric |
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