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Simple Words Spoken Softly
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Simple Words Spoken Softly |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
She slipped beside him Beneath quilts and satin sheets And whispered her fears He gathered her in Listening to words in tears Flowing from gone years They lay beneath sheets And spoke of another when With the softest of touch She woke to sorrow There beneath quilt and satin In an empty bed A new tomorrow Had become another day Filled by yesterday Was it just light night Or half a century Real or memory She walks in new light Adapting into the real Now able to feel Each night he awaits Whispering soft through the years Calming the day’s fears Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a poem from hearts... softly spoken. Well done, Sir. I like this very, vry much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Professor, A very tender and supportive poem; you make the reader feel as thought she is there. Thank you for sharing your heart. It is quite beautiful. miscellanea |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
absolutely beautiful - so real |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"A new tomorrow Had become another day Filled by yesterday" Liked that part...Professor, this poem is just amazing.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A new tomorrow Had become another day Filled by yesterday So much said here, wonderful.  and I am haunted |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yet another Gloomy addition to my favorites.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dang, talk abut a warm gentle hug. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is perfectly beautiful... this is the kind of poetry I love! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Very beautiful, loved to read this hug, kelly |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Beautiful Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Miscellanea is right....you have a tender side amid that gloom, and it's good to see. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
He gathered her in Listening to words in tears Flowing from gone years as they say..your soft side is showing~~  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I hope things balance out, and she listens and pampers you, as well, when need be, you deserve it...the warmth and understanding is most evident here Terrific write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
soft and touching write Proffessor. Well done. |
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