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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-05 03:49 PM

resounding truth
echoes
in the deepest chasms
of my mind

eternity ceases
for a mere moment

one breath away
from breathing
your name

sighs of pleasure
and pulsing veins

of love,
and life,
and death,
theres no such power

greater than
your gentle touch
in this tender hour

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2004-12-05 05:39 PM

Derrick~
Just lovely ... almost breathlessly this read embraces me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2004-12-05 05:45 PM

wow very nice

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3 posted 2004-12-05 06:00 PM

Excellence....your signature hits it dead-on for this one.

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4 posted 2004-12-05 06:31 PM

very pretty m'friend

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5 posted 2004-12-08 08:29 AM

All of the above and more!

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