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Open Poetry #34

Can't Lose

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-12-05 01:26 AM

Though the last few days have been shady,
I know I will never lose my Lady.
Everything's good on the home front now,
Through the bad times together we'll plow.
And you I can't lose.
Even with my idiocy at hand,
You act as if it was all planned.
And you I won't lose.
When I'm down and feeling blue,
You comfort me letting me know your love is true.
And you I can't lose.
For this heart you took and did mend,
And now you are my life long friend.
And I WON'T lose you.
So to you my angel from Heaven above,
I give you all of my love,
And you won't lose me.
To the love of my life I give this write,
To show you are my healing light.
You mean everything to me,
This I hope you can see.
You..I refuse to lose.

can you fly like a penguin

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2004-12-05 05:19 AM

a dedicated man! yes!

Write on! Write on! I love it!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-12-05 10:38 AM

"To the love of my life I give this write,
To show you are my healing light.
You mean everything to me,
This I hope you can see.
You..I refuse to lose."

Loved that part...great write! You wont lose her with this poem!