Open Poetry #34 |
From Angel Awake |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Burnt orange magenta sky Scraped with grey clouds Wind whispering through branches She stands listening Frightened of the darkening light Loud noises behind bushes She braces holding her breath Parting leaves An angel moves from hidden spaces Black wings contrasting coloured fading sky She looks up scared into the angels eyes Searching for an answer to her fear The angel stands silently shedding a tear Crimson red blood runs slowly down his cheek Rain begins to fall sparsley The mist moistening her face Still beneath looking upward memories lost She feels a warmness engulfing her body Angel closed wings around her Her weary head to his strong brown chest She feels happiness overcome her Her mind fills with memories past She begins to smile, no longer in fear Then darkeness as the angel disapears Eyes open they see nothing Night has grown blackened She struggles as light shines on her forehead From window gape Awake "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " [This message has been edited by whiskey (12-04-2004 07:51 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ How very wonderful to see you here on the pages blue~ This penning is tenderly poignant~ Your new photo is stunning~ Wishing you and yours the happiest of the holidays to come~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
whiskey Strong thoughts, good write, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, like last night |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write Julie. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautifully penned Julie. Hugs and good to read you here again. ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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