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What I Can't
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What I Can't |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What I Can’t I cannot stand the thought of death It takes away my very breath It throws a shroud my field of seem And dims the light of what I dream And dream I must to dull the ache To stop the pain that rues my wake The fantasy of rainbows walks The ecstasy of lovers talk It clips the wings on which I fly It turns the sky to darker vie It blows a sand storm full of grime That grinds you up in age and time It brings my dance to slower pace And fades the rose upon her lace It dims the vision of desire Gone illusions of admire It is the winter after fall It is the snow that covers all. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Winter is great when it is becoming very hot, like here in Australia. Snow I dont think I could bare though a gentle inbetween would be nice. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
whiskey LOL I'll drink to that. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Come see the beautiful veil of snow, Sy... it is not so bad... and death? It will take its holiday... and spring will rebirth your wings...    |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Br, yes... death is cold. G'mornin' to you, sir  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"It blows a sand storm full of grime That grinds you up in age and time" Yes, it does. Very well put. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Methinks you need a hot cup of Chai tea this brisk morn. Come join me please? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Having already died this year myself, you have nothing to worry about my friend! Waking up and facing life, is the scary part of our existence! lol   EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Don't mind me today I never know what will come in my head, I just write. Alyssa, Thank you sweet  icebox Thank you for the read and comment. Nancy, I'll be right there. vandana, Thank you dear. Earth Angel, LOL It's my breath that fears death. My mind accepts it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear Sy... we all must go and who really wants to stay here forever anyhow? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes. I understand. There is a difference! Death itself is not to be feared ~ but the process in getting there can be the pits! When our time comes to go back Home, let's hope God just beams us up! ~ Okay, Scotty?!? Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Earth angel got the idea. Thank you sweet. Earth Angel, You are a wise angel. And you make my dragon to keep his fire on low. LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always needing and enjoying your wise words |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you so much for the read. |
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