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~eternal child~
Junior Member

since 2004-11-23

Posts 31

0 posted 2004-12-03 11:47 PM

shape me
a moment
as i’m afraid
to touch

i hide my eyes
in sigh

with all that
is burning
blue

and i ache
the wet mouth
of you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-12-04 12:11 PM

Nice...now I'm thinking about my girlfriend....James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-12-04 09:10 AM

There is a reshaping
that follows
on the heels of
your request...

Enjoyed this brief excerpt of need...

thank you!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-12-04 10:30 AM

My thoughts exactly!!

M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-12-04 10:45 AM

eternal child,
Quite childish LOL enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-04 12:22 PM

wow! I like this!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-12-04 02:38 PM

Very nice write Eternal Child!

Enjoyed~

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-12-04 07:05 PM

Very much enjoyed this piece...well done!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2004-12-04 07:37 PM

you are shapely enough, the poem was an added bonus.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2005-01-13 11:04 AM

"and i ache
the wet mouth
of you"

...a desirable ache creating a poem that lingers on my tongue.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-01-13 11:11 AM

Very nice visual.

JL

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2005-01-14 12:18 PM

desire...

short but full of emotion, well done

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2005-01-14 12:27 PM

and i ache
the wet mouth
of you

oh yes, I know this feel whenever my Honey-Love
is there and I am here.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

13 posted 2005-01-14 12:45 PM

and i ache
the wet mouth
of you

Now, that is one fabulous line of poetry!

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