Open Poetry #34 |
In My Alone |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very treasured to me is this special place where burden merits no meaning. I am alone in the world yet one with the universe. Serene is this space where only God hears my thoughts and moments of escape are found from seeming hold of curse. I can breathe deeply life's essence and cherish pause of quiet spent when I embrace me, in my alone my soul resides in grace content. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
boy, this was certainly amazingly beautiful I can remember, soon after the seperation from a very bad marriage...being along scared the begezzus out of me...but then, something happened, and it slowly ever so slowly became like this....the peace and sounds are miraculous, as is your delightful poem this morning...thank you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is like a comforting old friend that visits for a while yes Lee....Thanks lady. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes...and it's all consumming...tranquil and hypnotic...and if you pardon me saying, almost could define it errotically...in a spiritual sense? Perhaps that sounds a little ridiculous? But erotic in the sense that I believe God would approve? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am alone in the world yet one with the universe. Serene is this space where only God hears my thoughts and moments of escape are found from seeming hold of curse. ~*~ How very special this sentiment... and how meaningful in so many ways... you've a lot to be proud of, little one... and this poem proves that... Momma K |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lee I do agree and know exactly what your saying. Hugs. Momma K thank you for your friendship and love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smiles here |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i visit there and it gets harder to leave sometimes and land back on earth. but this brings me along,tho you want a solo flight, i may tag along |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dixie, thanks and hugs to you. Michele, thank you and you are welcome any time my friend. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully expressed peaceful contentment Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this place you speak of Donna... and it's so good to be able to go there and just breathe. Hugs pretty lady~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I used to feel this way about alone time - now I long for company often - perhaps I have too much alone time - must find the balance - Am glad you have this lovely space that you can call your own - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"content." Too bad more don’t have that in their lives. Beautiful poem. JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to be content...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
amazing. have missed ready your writes |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i found this peaceful to read, thanks can you fly like a penguin |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, this felt so peaceful!! Beautiful writing, Sweetie. hugs, Ethel |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
beautiful write... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone and happy Monday! I appreciate you each. |
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