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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when my eyes were hands folded into some enchanted dream and I gave the sand letter sounds did the wind listen to the names plucked ripe from grains in equidistant letter sequences just to be ripples then on that ocean where I waited for your breasts to rise as my nourishment's horizon and for the rest of you to follow obediently prophesied as more than a mind's worth love ________________ dark |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok you know when you throw the ocean in the mix...I'm gonna love it  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, You could say that. enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhh Dark, I can remember feeling this way, when I was young...standing on the shore, looking out into the vastness of the horizon, wondering who and where he was...filled with hope, that he would someday, walk out of that horizon..with the gentle sea winds, reaching for my hand, and forever we'd walk the beaches of live....together.... Guess I read, then, to many romance novels...huh? Smiles and hugs for this wonderful end of the week writing...enticing and enriching with tons of love. Tremendous |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The waves must be heaving this morning... they do, in December, you know... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as more than a mind's worth love a line worth saving~~ M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
have always loved the sway of the ocean, and your poem puts me in the mood to feel the sway again.... well done Dark. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Very nice. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "as more than a mind's worth love" agreeing about this line....the whole poem is wonderful!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmm - D - beautiful - I can see the rise and fall of the waves and the sensuality of this - both in thoughts of the ocean and in thoughts of something deeper -  Love - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
your waves continue to break so interestingly |
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