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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-02 08:12 AM

we were water falls entwined
with vapor mingled dance
we saturated our commotion

I savored the samba of your breath
when you spoke to trees
and made the ends of willows

worship the sun of your eye sides
and your turbulent torrent
was the poetry of an amazon frolic

I was the rogues' gallery ruse
of famished panting glances
for the roe spend of your riverain

where reams of rimes we rigored
from our saloon song salacity
then without sacred obligation

you whispered sanctioned satiation

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Dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-02 08:15 AM

fine, quiet lines, these...
with a hint of wow...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2004-12-02 09:05 AM

"we were water falls entwined
with vapor mingled dance
we saturated our commotion"

lovin this

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-12-02 11:05 AM

Mmmmmm - morning Dark - a lovely bathe in words this morning - warm - nice -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2004-12-02 11:10 AM

ms sunshine, thanks for your review and warm smile.
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ms SEA, you please me with your selection of images, thank you lady friend.
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ms satin, call me calgone (sp) and let me take you away? thank you for your presence babe

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-12-02 11:12 AM

"you whispered sanctioned satiation"

I am sure she would, again and again.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2004-12-02 11:32 AM

ms susan C.. thank you charming one for your smiles and comments

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

7 posted 2004-12-02 12:05 PM

D-
Very beautiful as always.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-12-02 12:13 PM

ms 9, you bless me, as always, and I thank you

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-12-02 12:48 PM

DS

It's amazing how you make words sound so good together!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2004-12-02 12:49 PM

ms martie
you make them fit so well
with your eyes, thank you lady friend

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2004-12-02 06:27 PM

Amazing write...loved it.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2004-12-02 06:31 PM

ms alli....thanks to you ms for your eyes

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