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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
He turns off the radio and listens to the music Not frenzied beats or pulsating rhythms, but the slow suction of the blues, drawing, pulling him in- swimming in the womb of her, as if perhaps submerged in a warm jacuzzi filled with soothing antiseptic balming a cut in an anapestic beat, ta ta dum as she calls out to him, he dreams her songs, He only dreams of what he knows and since he is blind, He dreams not in sight, but in touch, and in taste, And of course, he dreams in sound, her sound, the blues. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, this IS a heart beat heard |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh I doooo love this one  *you're playin my song* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice one... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
the blues - sweet soul sounds slippin'- cradling the wounded soul - gotta love the blues SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Good write! Enjoyed~  ~Alli~ |
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