Open Poetry #34 |
My desires and the worlds |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yes I was a child A little too wild But now I tried And how I cried I will never be entirely free Of disires Endless fires I'll never excape thier eyes -The world they want to control- Is the same place I dispise\ I refuse to be a toy Fondled, then tossed by a boy All I want to do is fall away and thenbe held hearing "It's ok" Juju |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful write. Eric |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you. It is me releasing built up emotions from long ago juju |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I will never be entirely free Of disires Endless fires" know the feeling |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
VERY good write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thanjk you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Juju... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for the hug. I needed one. Juju |
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