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Softly Plied Velvet
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Softly Plied Velvet |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Eloquent, the melodious mind’s tongue, as eyes sipped the smoothness of soft silken skin, rising rhythmically to the cadence of ocean swells...effortlessly against white cotton lace. The whispered exclamation of thirst, lean fingers bringing to lips the cool waters of lust...Slowly taunting the etched glass, laced with a sweetness of roses and ginger. Dimpled drops lie still the wait of warming winds...winds that caress flowing locks that beg to be teased and twirled, passionately plied and molded into a delicate form. Brazen, the ride of dawn’s light....into the dusk of eve....unto the lie of velvet fur where two palms grasp as lips lightly touch...tease the waking dreams of mountain’s rise beneath a waning moon, basking in the reflect of lover’s skin on chilled, but warming...still waters... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ok...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
This is beautiful |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
yeah this was pretty awesome. especially from a cowboy! lol  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
...tease the waking dreams of mountain’s rise beneath a waning moon, basking in the reflect of lover’s skin on chilled, but warming...still waters... ************** Those are some mighty fine lines and images there and the whole piece was a real treat. Those lines above though just clicked for me special. Well done and I applaud you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness gracious sakes alive! Have you ever thought of writing a Harlequin Romance novel?!? ~ and a picture of you should be on the cover!  Romance drips from your illustrious quill! To love and your writings about it! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Now that is a mouth full of worded candy. Well done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think I just drooled on my keyboard.  Softly sensual and I LOVE IT!! ~Afternoon hugs to you Barry~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Deep breath - long sigh -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully written Barry. Soft and sensual. believe in what your heart feels... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful!!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Wish I could convey thoughts so easy. Enjoyed your post. Thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ohhh do I love this? You bet your assonance I do. Very well crafted and a pure pleasure to read, Mag. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a true artist, you are |
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