Open Poetry #34 |
Sister |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
"Sister" My sister lost in dispair You have demons in your hair and they are every where tell me just how do you bare Yes your beautiful today If you won't scare me away If you do it's still ok I'M YOUR SISTER "I WILL STAY" So tell me what can you do when your world is just so blue even if you hurt me too..... Sister I will still love you -Juli '04 |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
wow, i felt like my own sister was the subject matter! so i guess i can relate ... honestly. good write. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, kindness and love - acceptance - very nice - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
thank you JUJU |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like this very much Dave |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am glad YOu liked this poem. It came from the heart(: Juju |
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