Open Poetry #34 |
Hawk |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
The shadow of the meadow. The end... without spite. Enough, that it is taught from birth to think in prey. That talents strong in what they are change the context of the scene. Where a street light is just a precipice from which to see, the hare still trembles within its fur. And who are we, as drive our cars beneath the clearer eye, moving through, on familiar roads, oblivious to the claw. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bravo!!! Well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent John!! Well done! ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The Hunter and the prey Dave |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Extremely well done sir. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful! |
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