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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-30 10:37 AM

you said . . .

under the dream
do you dare
dance a lover
and know his eyes

I answer . . .

I would wear your eyes
as a second drape skin
and feel your gaze
pausing to linger within

I would see your eyes
in the candle flame flicker
and know your love
which within those eyes glimmers

I would dance with you
waltzing love step devine
upon starlit canvas
in ecstasy's shine

take me in your arms
let's glide into our dreams
and brim our love over
'til we overflow our seams

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2004-11-30 10:55 AM

ms susan

I shall hold you
to your reply

let me begin
the music

may I have
this dance

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

2 posted 2004-11-30 11:04 AM

::lovely sway to the inner rhythms::

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-11-30 11:07 AM

Now you have gotten me in the mood for some "dancing love"!!!! You do these soooo welll! You truly are a Wonder of a Woman!

Linda

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-11-30 11:57 AM

nice job Susan!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-11-30 01:50 PM

Most inviting! Great poetry.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-11-30 01:52 PM

Very nicely penned Susan and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-11-30 05:34 PM

Lovely...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-11-30 07:55 PM

Thank you kindly my friends - 'tis easy to write when one is inspired by the dark -

Hugs all - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-11-30 09:00 PM

finding yourself in another person's eyes is a lovely place indeed
very heartfilled words

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