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Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-11-29 10:54 PM

She strides
in polyrhythms
on beat
with totally
different drummers
in conflicting genres.
she is
the one
who caught
my eye
and shall not
relinquish it.
the one
who hates
contacts,
loves glasses
though they
obscure her
diamond eyes.
she who
will greet
those
that are
foreign
to her
with
ambient kindness.
she, whose
smile
stops most
stone dead
in their path.
she is
the girl
with the
unique antiquity,
an ambient
aura filled
with a montage
of color.
her difference
is beauty

(a quick write of emotions. Let me know what you think. Hope you all enjoy)

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-11-29 11:26 PM

Quite a compliment to her...even if your aim was quick.
Nice write.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-30 05:30 AM

you describe her well

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-30 06:26 AM

a very nice compliment indeed
Lovely write...enjoyed...this gal sounds like a terrific person, a special one which gravitates people to her. I'd say, your a very lucky person to know her.

Hugs

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-11-30 10:37 AM

loved the words and style

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-11-30 01:28 PM

goodness...

you made me want to bask in her presence for a bit...

Very well done.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-11-30 06:26 PM

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-11-30 09:19 PM

~*~Bump

Deserving of more air time.
Very beautiful write.
TD

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

8 posted 2004-11-30 10:28 PM

thank you everyone for dropping in. TD thanks for the bump

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-11-30 10:34 PM

A beauty indeed and so is your poem

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

10 posted 2004-11-30 10:58 PM

Much enjoyed

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