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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-05 01:51 AM

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"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-02-05 03:54 AM

You lady, are doing beautiful work here.

Writing generally frustrates me as too linear and two dimensional but with this, you manage to capture movement, and I'm not one to love a flat graphic for enhancement, but this is perfect.

It left me feeling "fluttered".

I like that much.

You captured me.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-02-05 04:02 AM

Love it! Hell yeah! This is just damn beautiful. It's like the press of lips to the softness of flesh. Lord this is some of the most exquiste work I have seen from you in a while Snowy! Hot, hot, hot, hot hot! Somebody check the thermostat...the lady is on FIRE!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2005-02-05 07:28 AM

Leonid clusters fall from the heavens in reverence of your precious bijous, but are tenebrous with comparrison to your discourse...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-02-05 05:57 PM

Mmm - had to bump this up to the top - it needs to be seen, felt, read and savored -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2005-02-05 06:00 PM

I love it. Very awesome write indeed.

Cold hands means a warm heart

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-02-05 07:21 PM

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

7 posted 2005-02-05 09:30 PM

WOW DO BELIEVE I WILL BE READING YOU MORE OFTEN SNOW VERY NICE IMAGERY AND BLENDING. THE SEA REFLECTING THE SKY THE SKY REFLECTING THE COLORS OF THE SEA BOTH MERGING TOGETHER AS ONE AS THEY ARE EQUALY YOKED TOGETHER. NICE

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2005-02-06 02:32 AM

thank you all very much for such wonderful thoughts !!

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-02-06 11:30 PM

awesome!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

10 posted 2005-02-07 07:44 PM

Wow! This is very, very well done, Snow!

Corinne

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