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Intrepidly His Vanity
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Intrepidly His Vanity |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As her heart sang its songs in the meadow Full the sun, shined its glitter in shadow Any season that reason forthcoming Skips the light of fantastic still strumming He appeared on the outskirt of sages Never sure in the turning of pages Yet delight is his signature image Prowess bold for the sidelines in scrimmage In his follow her skirt tucked in waste band Gently fair, through the dimming of bad land In the scatter of elk through the carpet On the hoof of the bull gone to market At the edges of pine lay permission Shedding sleeve and her own inhibition Shuddered shoulder and rack in the ripple of black All his sturdy and steam but the tip of a dream she held back That he knew her so well, dipped the cup deep the well Soft his touch to her hair, as the snow of not now slowly fell Although pleased with himself, in his moves made so stealth He remained in the brushes, overseeing her steps, for the good of her health All the while did she know that he could love her so? That his tough disposition just a misplaced omission of whole It is said of her still, by her own light and will That she meets him half way, in the climb of each hill To delight and astound, songs of flight move the ground And his beauty grows deeper every sweet scent around Copyright Kkh 11/28/04 |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
beautiful. I like this one alot. Kind of brought back memories good. Juju |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
On the Elk range or in a singles bar...vanity abounds... enjoyed __________ice/ford ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the pearl in the distance waves, while coming closer and closer..... Wonderul magic penned here |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
life and relationships are all about that hill and being halfway... A unique write K. Little out of your norm, but quite good. Flarrs are bloomin indoors! Tarrs are rollin'....outdoors... Smile! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lovely poetry. Very nice read. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very good write, Kathleen. Enjoyed~ ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully written and expressed! loved the flow and easy rhyme, like cutting through butter...fantastic writing! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It is said of her still, by her own light and will That she meets him half way, in the climb of each hill" ~ I especially like those lines.  A lovely poem, you have penned TD!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely piece Kathleen.. a little different for you and I enjoyed it much. Hugs~Nancy ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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