Open Poetry #34 |
Astral Planes |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Tools raised in the early evening light to blend a thought of planes of thought to understand connections of light in the hubris of a day’s delight Seeing more than we could think, understand, acknowledge, believe, and want We were frightened by such force on a darkened background as a net, neural power sparkled on a transparent dark blue sky We felt days in awesome power sparking fragments on auras That later cost minutes as years disappeared in memories of seconds and light flew without understanding of direction, power or reason From simple unadorned thoughts we crept to find ways to understand each other and to avoid creed, religion, force In simple minds we focused on each other and unfocused on more than meeting our minds to flash electric thoughts that grew in gravity until we flew in thought bonding in mind awestruck in feeling mindless in understanding of Our bodies, minds, ambitions, strength and feeling [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-30-2004 11:30 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed the entire feel of this....made me think of billions of little light thoughts.... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Lee I think it is one of the best I have written in a long time. Need to sort out the layout and stuff regards Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Is this about Sept.11...James |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
No it was about Astral Planes. Subject title was wrong and it started wrong but seemed to move as I wanted it to, after that. Tools were methods of escaping from a day to meditate. I wasn't thinking about 9/11 although I have an Economist front page of the Twin Towers and the word Remember permanently on my notice board. Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have always believed there are several layers of planes... and that we could all touch them, if we allowed ourselves to do so, by looking outside the box, and knowing that there are things much larger than what we imagine, surrounding us... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Me beimg a constant thinker loved the focus of thought Hope |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Our bodies, minds, ambitions, strength and feeling” I should think that we would indeed have all the answers, maybe some day. A very insightful write. Sounds of searching those Astral Planes? I enjoyed the read, and where this takes the reader DavidPage. Excellent write. JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this very much as I do know something about Astral Planes. Well done sir. ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks to Sunshine for changing the subject title for me, the original was wrong - much appreciated. It is funny in a way that you can almost look and see images, but is it neural, spiritual, or a blinding headache. regards Dave |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Dave I really enjoyed the read and hope all is well in your life. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Sue No it is all up the creek but that is for me to sort out. I'm an IT Contractor at 56 who has been scrabbling for work after my last major two year contract. Jean has a large amount of birds so I cant move. In the South West so I get excluded for any other work even though I work anywhere in the world with 22 years in IT. Fighting against a whole stack of problems but I enjoy IT even it if doesn't enjoy me, once I reached 50. Thanks for the wishes Sue. I will keep soldering on. Dave |
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milkweed Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42fields of gold |
This was really interesting. Hope your tools work well for you. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes they did and I did finally rewrite it although it has been buried somewhere on the site. Thanks Dave |
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