Open Poetry #34 |
Fragrance Of The Butterfly |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Made steam in fragrances of butterflies Creeping gloss on mirrored vanity replies Imbued in natural light, a jungle flight Be bold, curiosity draped soft as silken wing Imagination takes this whisper into lung to sing Discovering my own song yet unsung, undone Submerging inch by satin inch Into the culture of our mingled mind Massaging wanton thoughts of spirits blind The strangeness passes over in a breeze There leaves a warm sensation in its please To drum within the coral of each other, happily to smother Wild the call that settles there to leave my touch Communications traveled in the brush of hush And drum, the fragile pulse that calls you come Cocooned into the afternoon of where we were And carried into night that same soft flight That draws me into warm and bathes my soul delight Copyright Kkh 11/27/04 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - Kathleen - simply lovely - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely Kathleen... Your warmth and eloquence grace these pages. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful writing, Kathleen. Hugs. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful!!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wild the call that settles there to leave my touch Communications traveled in the brush of hush And drum, the fragile pulse that calls you come touching lines~~ M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Be bold, curiosity draped soft as silken wing Imagination takes this whisper into lung to sing Discovering my own song yet unsung, undone Greatly inspiring, dear TD! Very beautiful poetry! Love, Margherita |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely images, warm thoughts, fun infiltration of rhyme Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Amazing, the way you write...this is just beautiful! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful, I especially love the title. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Spot on Dave |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
TOUCHED!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ The delicacy of your piece is music to my eyes~ Lovely ... lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have from the very first time reading you always enjoyed the way you spill such vivid images over emotions and thoughts in your works. This one is no exception. A beautiful piece of poetry laced with so much to see and feel. I truely enjoyed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your words fill the senses with summers touch on this late fall day |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Submerging inch by satin inch Into the culture of our mingled mind Massaging wanton thoughts of spirits blind TD, Love the imagery! Good to be here to read your poetry. It seems like I'm so busy anymore that I have hardly time to turn around! A pleasure to read. miscellanea |
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