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Lost Filigree
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Lost Filigree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lost Filigree Each morning when I awake I do a doubtful double take As acid time dubs my stay Dissolving bit by bit away Of now I feel an amputee It does not reach a part of me The awe that dances me each dawn A part of me I feel is gone Anesthetized by wines of why Drunk of sipping common lie I lay in stupor on my back Grieving for the part I lack Yet never will I drink enough Of this vile and raging stuff That drags me through the depths of hell The rotting and the sulfur smell As acid time sifts my stay Dissolving bit by bit away |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no part of you is missing that I can see Sy good morning! and sweep that doubt right out the door! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know this feeling... and know how the acid works... and that is when I go in search of a base to negate the burn... and search for my sighs in Sy...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oh, believe me sir ... your poetic filigree is intact~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sy, you sure nailed an awesome title for this one that is for sure. As a matter of fact after this bronchitis bout looking for a little lost filagree m'self here.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! I cannot help but wonder what part was amputated! Perhaps it is still there but you just can't feel it! Swish, swish, with my magic wand! ~ Numbness be gone!!! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
From the sight of your poetry, dear Sir, the missing part isn't obvious at all. You are such an excellent poet, Seymour!! Thank you for sharing.  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, I believe your poetic filigree is definely all there. hugs and smiles, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Filigree is some of the most beautiful crafstmanship in silver there is - stunning stuff - we all lose bits of ourselve - but we can pattern our loss into our beauty - and you, dear Sy, wear your beauty -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Doubt is a part of living.  Sunshine, May your sighs become flowers. Marge, Now that I know, everything will be easer. LOL Sharon, Forget about the lost, just shine up what's left. LOL Earth Angel, Thanks for the help, I'm just flaking away. LOL garysgirl, Your sweet comment made me feel whole again. Marti, LOL I'll have to look again. Susan You are a love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Of now I feel an amputee It does not reach a part of me The awe that dances me each dawn A part of me I feel is gone ============================ Sun of dawn's rise...sun in dusking set ... may the days come and go without regret. Of many things we know not the how or why, still I find my innocence & awe in Sy's sky. *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Save that picture. and thank you for stopping bye. |
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