freestyle battle rap challenge for ETERNAL

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Open Poetry #34

freestyle battle rap challenge for ETERNAL

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-26 11:49 PM

come back at me,
and keep it freestyle.

im the original pip ~child~

erybody vote too!

WHERE MY "PIP"'S AT!
-----------------
INTRO:
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my dreams
are seen
only
by me

you
cant seem
to see
these
beams
that gleam
so free

you think
you are
you aint,
can never be

bluffing,
you're
nothing

cant bust me

tha "child" of

~dreams~

~DC~ baby
represent

[This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (11-27-2004 12:36 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-27 07:42 AM

pretty good

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