Open Poetry #34 |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
blossom paint crimson to red misses miles away to portray minor fade stay words on finger tips blushed by shame to exist the outside a cage wounded a place never a trade but a fate crimson to red the most common rash of truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
each word precisely placed a fine write indeed nice to see you once again |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Pandonov....Breakfast Of Champions! Glad I stumbled in here this morning....this poem is exactly what I needed -- that Scotland's finest, that is...and this much easier to imbibe.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thank you guys |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
i like this petre.... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm in a purple fog...the blend of red and blue Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
The poem is like a fine wine... Containing different flavored berries, With a great finish.. Applause! ___________ice ><> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Nice work Pandanov, as always Maree. into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
agree - nicely done- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Petre. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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