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Open Poetry #34

"My Mischievous Muse"

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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0 posted 2004-11-24 07:54 PM

She's sultry and she's smokin', and, she's sassy to the nines,
she slithers so seductively, that, chills run down my spine.
She woos whomever she should choose, seducing them on sight.
Her softly spoken secrets are a silver-tongued delight.

She shares the ancients' wisdom in some un-expected ways.
Her sacred vows, a promise, she delivers, some would say,
in doses of abundance, or, a dollop at a time,
as sleekly as a trollop dressed to kill, she's so sublime.

She's sexy, soft, sedated, statuesque and simply sweet.
Her touch is consecrated where the pen and paper meet.
In service of my muse I'd stick my head into a noose,
in spite of what's been said about me having some screws loose.

So, if you see her, tell her, that she so inspires me,
I don't mind being hung just like a moose is s'posed to be.

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-11-24 08:11 PM

Absolutely sublime.

I found the final line particularly intriguing.

yer adorable

and? You always give me something to think about!

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

2 posted 2004-11-24 08:20 PM

serenity,
Thanks dear. Check your inbox, Have a happy.
Doc

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-11-25 01:22 AM

yeppers! really cool piece here!

*Alli4000*

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4 posted 2004-11-25 01:07 PM

Love this...put a smile on my face.

Happy Thanksgiving!

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

5 posted 2004-11-25 06:01 PM

passing shadows,
Thanks. She left for awhile, but, I'm starting to think she's back. Happy Thanksgiving.
Doc

Alli4000,
Thank you for the gift of a smile, it never fails to make writing worth the effort. Happy Thanksgiving.
Doc

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