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Open Poetry #34

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-11-24 03:36 PM

Part of a theme on decorating the kitchen

Dave

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Have you ever had a rough morning
When your toast carries you down to breakfast
The eggs gently chasing the rooster around the yard
Whilst the bacon somersaults from your sausages
Into the tomato sauce
And the kitchen is decorated again

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-11-24 08:44 PM

Oh, I like this - this is fun - egg chasing the chicken -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-11-24 09:14 PM

Hey great work!
When you get done with your kitchen, can you design one for me?
Great Write DavePage.

JL

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

3 posted 2004-11-25 12:09 PM

Love the humor!  More, Dave!

               miscellanea

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-11-25 05:27 AM

almost every morning,
that's why I stopped eating breakfast

Margherita
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5 posted 2004-11-25 08:07 AM

haha... dear Dave, this made me smile!
Very well rendered morning chaos.
Can't happen to me, as I use Continental Breakfast without bacon or eggs and the like ...
But tomato sauce at lunch can well change the scene ...
Love, Margherita

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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6 posted 2004-11-25 02:10 PM

You captured many mornings...very well.

Eric

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-11-25 02:20 PM

Thanks all for your comments.

The third is a bit contrived - the other two were written from the soul as I really felt but I wanted to just finish off while I felt the humour.

Thanks once again

Dave

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